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- hello, I m new here.
- I learn english in high school, but few years I didn t repeat the language.
- My big wish is speake english very well.

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- hello, I m new here.
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- hHello, I ’m new on here.
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- I learn english in high school, but few years I didn t repeat the language.
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- I learnt english in high school, but ~~few years I didn t repeat the language~~it has been a few years and I haven't practiced the language and I have forgotten some of it.
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- My big wish is speake english very well.
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- ~~My big~~I wish isto speake english ~~very well~~fluently.
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