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Hi!
- Hello! How are you?
My best friend is just PERFECT!
- I don't know what say... Hum... I'm 13. I'm French.
- I play violin and piano (piano in my house with my stepfather) and I play drama.
- I would be an actress or a forensic scientist (yes, I know, it's crazy)! Bye ****

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- Hello! How are you?
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- Hello! How are you all?
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- I don't know what say... Hum... I'm 13. I'm French.
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- I don't know what say... Hum... I'm 13. I'm French.¶¶I don't know what to say. Hum.... I am 13 years old and I am French.
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- I play violin and piano (piano in my house with my stepfather) and I play drama.
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- I play violin and piano (piano in my house with my stepfather) and I play drama.¶¶I play piano at home with my stepfather and I play violin on my own. I play drama as well.
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- I would be an actress or a forensic scientist (yes, I know, it's crazy)! Bye ****
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- I would be an actress or a forensic scientist (yes, I know, it's crazy)! Bye **** ¶¶I want to be an actress or a forensic scientist someday. (Yes I know it is crazy!) Bye.
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