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    • Recommendation letter

    • Dear friends, there is a recommendation letter. that I wrote because I want to apply to a Phd program.
    • I going to apreciate any comment and correction of this recommendation letter.
    • National Autonomus University of Mexico Postgraduate of Engineering Faculty Systems Egnineering Department April 8th of 2013 Topic: Academic Recommendation Letter To Whom it May Concern, I have known Oscar Everardo Flores Choperena since 2009; He worked for me until August 2012 as Assistant Researcher at Systems Engineering Department.
    • His responsibilities have included support the Planning Laboratory Projects.
    • Also, we were co-workers in different kind of research projects that is included an intervention to National Institute of Ecology and Climate Change (INECC) as Planner Consultant.
    • In addition Mister Flores participated in the Regional Planning Seminar as Invited Researcher, by the way I was responsible for manage that seminar.
    • We were speakers in the XX International Congress of Management Sciences Research at Boca del Río, Veracruz, México with our congress presentation titled “La consultoría como un proceso de intervención sistémica”.
    • Mister Flores is highly respected by his co-workers for his willingness to help anyone anytime he can.
    • He is organized, diligent in her functions, easily reachable, and passionate for his work.
    • Besides, he has demonstrated upper skills in research and team working; he is creative and highly responsible about academic and intellectual development.
    • In brief, I fully recommend Mister Flores Choperena in professional and academic issues.
    • He has demonstrated outstanding achievements and skills for postgraduate studies.
  • If you need further information regarding this reference, please do not hesitate to contact me.
  • Sincerely yours.
  • Dr. Benito Sánchez Lara Chief of Planning, Transport and Financial Optimization Section Doctoral and Master Program Systems Engineering Department, Engineering Faculty National Autonomus University of Mexico Phone number: +521....

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    • Recommendation letter To Whom it May Concern, Is a pleasure for me to recommend Mr.Oscar Everardo Flores Choperena for graduate program at your university, I have known Mr.Flores since 2009; He worked for me until August 2012 as an Assistant Researcher at Systems Engineering Department.¶His responsibilities have included supporting the Planning Laboratory Projects.¶Also, I had him as my co-worker in different kind of research projects that is included working in National Institute of Ecology and Climate Change (INECC) as a Planner Consultant.¶In addition Mr.Flores participated in the Regional Planning Seminar as an Invited Researcher, which I was responsible for managing that seminar. we had presentation in the XX International Congress of Management Sciences Research at Boca del Río, Veracruz, México which the presentation title was :“La consultoría como un proceso de intervención sistémica”.¶Mr.Flores is highly respected by his co-workers for his willingness to help anyone anytime he can.¶He is organized, diligent in her functions, easily reachable, and passionate for work.¶Besides, he has demonstrated upper skills in research and team working; he is creative and highly responsible about academic and intellectual development.¶In brief, I fully recommend Mr.Flores Choperena in professional and academic issues.¶He has demonstrated outstanding achievements and skills for postgraduate studies.¶If you need further information regarding this reference, please do not hesitate to contact me.¶Sincerely yours.¶Dr. Benito Sánchez Lara Chief of Planning, Transport and Financial Optimization Section Doctoral and Master Program Systems Engineering Department, Engineering Faculty National Autonomus University of Mexico Phone number: +521....
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    • National Autonomus University of Mexico Postgraduate of Engineering Faculty Systems Egnineering Department April 8th of 2013 Topic: Academic Recommendation Letter To Whom it May Concern, I have known Oscar Everardo Flores Choperena since 2009; He worked for me until August 2012 as Assistant Researcher at Systems Engineering Department.
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    • National Autonomus University of Mexico¶Postgraduate of Engineering Faculty¶Systems Egnineering Department¶¶April 8th of 2013¶Topic: Academic Recommendation Letter¶¶To Whom it May Concern,¶¶I have known Oscar Everardo Flores Choperena since 2009;. He worked for me until August 2012 as Assistant Researcher at Systems Engineering Department.
    • National Autonomus University of Mexico¶Postgraduate of Engineering Faculty¶Systems Egnineering Department¶¶April 8th of 2013¶Topic: Academic Recommendation Letter¶¶To Whom it May Concern,¶¶I have known Oscar Everardo Flores Choperena since 2009;. He worked for me until August 2012 as Assistant Researchera Research Assistant at Systems Engineering Department. at (where? name of company?)
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    • Also, we were co-workers in different kind of research projects that is included an intervention to National Institute of Ecology and Climate Change (INECC) as Planner Consultant.
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    • Also, wWe were also co-workers in different kinds of research projects that is included an intervention to National Institute of Ecology and Climate Change (INECC) as Planner Consultant.
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    • In addition Mister Flores participated in the Regional Planning Seminar as Invited Researcher, by the way I was responsible for manage that seminar.
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    • In addition, Mister Flores participated in the Regional Planning Seminar as Invited Researcher, by the way to which I was responsible for manage that seminaring.
    • In addition Mister. Flores participated in the Regional Planning Seminar as an Invited Researcher, by the way I was responsible for manage that seminar.
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    • We were speakers in the XX International Congress of Management Sciences Research at Boca del Río, Veracruz, México with our congress presentation titled “La consultoría como un proceso de intervención sistémica”.
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    • We were speakers inat the XX International Congress of Management Sciences Research at Boca del Río, Veracruz, México with our congress presentation to congress entitled “La consultoría como un proceso de intervención sistémica”.
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    • Besides, he has demonstrated upper skills in research and team working; he is creative and highly responsible about academic and intellectual development.
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    • BesidesFurthermore, he has demonstrated uppesuperior skills in research and team working; h. He is creative and highly responsible about academic and intellectual development.
    • Besides, hHe has demonstrated upperadvanced skills in research and team working; he. Everardo is creative and highlvery responsible about academic and intellectual development.
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    • Dr. Benito Sánchez Lara Chief of Planning, Transport and Financial Optimization Section Doctoral and Master Program Systems Engineering Department, Engineering Faculty National Autonomus University of Mexico Phone number: +521....
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