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Testo da stefanopane - English

  • An experience at the park

  • Another post for you, friends of polyglot club.
    • In the last text I said that I would wrote once a week, but I think I’ll write twice or three times a week.
  • This time I want to talk about an experience that I had yesterday.
    • I was walking on a park, with my dog.
  • He’s a beautiful half-breed, a mixture between a Beagle and a Boxer.
    • Suddently my dog looked like he smelt something very interesting.
  • He started to jump and move fast from one side to the other of the path where we were walking, trying to show me something.
    • Than, after all these curious movements, he introduce his muzzle under a bush.
    • My wondering was huge when I discovered that under that bush there were three puppies of “Jaguatirica”, a sort of big wild cat living in Brazil.
    • Jaguatirica is a shy and nocturnal animal who is very difficult to see during the day, and even more difficult to approach.
  • At the end I decided to leave the three puppies under the bush.
  • I thought the mother would return soon.
    • And I was right, going away I saw the mother arriving with something in her mouth, probably a meal for the three puppies.

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