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Text from jphilippe - English

    • hi

    • I m french and I m fourty four.
  • I work in a telecommunication firm in Paris.
  • I want to improve my English.
  • I live in a house in a little town : Ablis (near Paris).
    • I would discute with somebody in English.
    • Like I'm a beginner i need help to correct me.
    • But i could try help somebody in french. Thanks

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English