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  • i have a dream

  • may be one of my dreams in this life is to be married with the person whome i love ...and to have children with him it is sooo hard and awful to live without your half your half is the person who can share everything with ...without secrets he is yourself

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    • may be one of my dreams in this life is to be married with the person whome i love ...and to have children with him it is sooo hard and awful to live without your half your half is the person who can share everything with ...without secrets he is yourself
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