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  • Upside Down

  • A few days before I saw a movie named Upside Down with my girlfriend.
  • It was an interesting movie, I really enjoy this kind of movies that you think it is possible a parallel universe.
  • I've never had thought about a world upside another world besides their gravities were opposites.
  • I can see a little complain how the world works, peope who are upside were rich and they belittled who are down and treated them like garbage.
  • Upside ones were more technologically advanced and they sucked richness from downside ones.
  • They don't accept any relationship between people who were from different gravities; It seems like "Romeo and Juliet", Rich and Poor can´t love between them.
  • However Love is more powerful than any force, and they show us how to fight against forces apparently stronger than them, How love is a powerful engine that move us to limits unimaginable and finally someone gave them a solution to stay together.
  • The movie gave me some teachings: *Human mind is infinite, and your limit is your imagination, every day you can see something new and you can imagine or create something that nobody have imagined or created before.
  • *When you are in love with someone or something that force makes you go on beyond limits till you reach what you want.
  • *It doesn´t matter if you are poor or rich, every person is important and we all worth the same, If you are rich instead of belittle poor ones help them, and If you are poor do not feel hatred or envy about rich ones.
  • We must love each other and help when somebody needs something, sometimes people don't need money or food just a warm word and a hug.

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    • I can see a little complain how the world works, peope who are upside were rich and they belittled who are down and treated them like garbage.
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    • They don't accept any relationship between people who were from different gravities; It seems like "Romeo and Juliet", Rich and Poor can´t love between them.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • However Love is more powerful than any force, and they show us how to fight against forces apparently stronger than them, How love is a powerful engine that move us to limits unimaginable and finally someone gave them a solution to stay together.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • The movie gave me some teachings: *Human mind is infinite, and your limit is your imagination, every day you can see something new and you can imagine or create something that nobody have imagined or created before.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
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    • *It doesn´t matter if you are poor or rich, every person is important and we all worth the same, If you are rich instead of belittle poor ones help them, and If you are poor do not feel hatred or envy about rich ones.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • We must love each other and help when somebody needs something, sometimes people don't need money or food just a warm word and a hug.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11