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Hello!
I am learning English!
I want to improve my knowledge.
- My job is teacher.
- I like to teach children, but children don`t want to be teaching.
- Children ask me often: "why we study?
- We want to go out!" How can I convince them that it`s important to learn.
- When I studied I understood this myself.
- I answer: Soon we shall have summer holidays! Time to rest!

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- My ~~pupils~~Students or My Pupils¶¶* Remember to always capitalize ALL words in a title. Also, the word "student" is used more often to describe learners than the word "pupil". "Student" is more common usage. "Pupil" can also refer to part of the eye.
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- I am learning English!
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- I want to improve my knowledge.
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- My job is teacher.
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- I like to teach children, but children don`t want to be teaching.
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- I like to teach children, but children don`t want to be t~~eaching~~aught.
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- I like to teach children, but the children ~~don`t want to be~~cannot teach~~ing~~ me.
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- I like to teach children, but it seems that the children don`t want to ~~be teaching~~learn.
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- Children ask me often: "why we study?
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- Children often ask me ~~often~~: "wWhy wedo we have to study?
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- We want to go out!" How can I convince them that it`s important to learn.
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- We want to go out and play!" How can I convince them that it` is important to learn.
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- When I studied I understood this myself.
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- I answer: Soon we shall have summer holidays! Time to rest!
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- I ~~answer: Soon we shall have summer holidays! T~~often answer them, "Soon it will be summer! Summer is the time to rest!
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