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    • summer

  • Hi, my name is Ivan.
    • I am from the city of Tomsk, Russia.I want to learn English.
  • Every summer I worked in the oil field.
  • This summer I worked as a skilled worker. basically, I serve christmas trees, check the pressure, mowing the grass, teaching intern. all experienced workers were on holiday, on this, I was one of the main skilled workers.
    • We did not have pumps, so it was easy I mean my job.
  • In addition, I had the time swim in the river, of course unknown to authority authority.
    • I also participated in sports.
  • Running, hard lifting, it is very useful for me.
    • But of course, in the first place was the jub.
  • I like to work in the oil industry, I think it's interesting, of course sometimes necessary to carry out the dirty work.
    • For example, cleaning oil barn, this is a very unpleasant job.
  • All day breathing vapors of oil, road dust, In addition, the work of a shovel but this summer happened very interesting case, when I cut down young trees in the timber I saw a bear.
    • He was in the raspberry patch, and like a snowblower eating raspberries.
  • I was very scared, but not confused.
  • I took a few steps back, and slowly walked towards the car.
    • No one believed me. but not returned there.
  • in a few days fires began. they are popping up everywhere. every day we were ready to fight the fire. gas masks, fire suits it was put to us, every day we went to put out the fire on the BMP.
  • Again shovel, fumes, smoke, lots of water and fire. helicopters NTLB, BMP, many people. it was like a military action. it was interesting, and scary.
    • it seemed that the fire surround you, and output will not be.
  • This summer has been very busy.
  • I am happy with my profession.

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