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  • Music festival

    • Dear Sir/Madam I’m writing with regard to the 14th annual Callington Music festival, which I attended for the third time.
    • I would like to congratulate you on a successful organization of this event.
    • It’s a particularly good idea.
    • Atmosphere was friendly, food and beverages were taste and cheap, toilet and washing facilities were clean.
    • Vivid modern decorations created holiday’s mood.
    • The price was suitable for a thoroughly high level of the organization like you had.
    • However I have two suggestions regarding next year’s festival.
    • First of all, every guest wishes that a field would be wider as there was a bit narrowly.
    • Secondly, only one rapper was at the festival, although there were a lot of raps’ admirers, even I am not an exception.
  • So, that is all.
    • I reckon that my offers are not unjustified.
  • I do hope you take my suggestions into account when organizing next year’s event.
  • Yours faithfully, Tania

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