添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

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  • Crush or Love?

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    • "Crush and Love are the twins.
    • Because Crush and Love have a same face, so their mother always confused them.
    • It let Crush and Love don't know their name clearly.
    • They think the name is not a important thing, so Crush always introduced himself to the new friends will say "My name is Love." But they have different dispositions.
    • Love is a ashamed boy,don't often appears of us,and likes be with the one forever and pay all of him.
    • Love is also a silented boy, he don't like speak words by the mouth,but the heart,he will use his heart and action to let you understand him.
  • Crush is a enthusiatic boy, and likes go outside to know friends.
    • So we ofen meet Crush.
    • Crush like make new friends, and every friends like have a time limit for Crush.
    • Because Crush's dream is traveling the whole world and make friends with all the people in this world,so he can't stop his step.
  • Because they have the same face, we always misunderstand them.
    • " Sometimes, we will meet Crush or we are the Crush. but the others didn't told lies to us on pupose,and we too.
    • Because our heart too compilicated to let us misunderstand.
    • The sentences we said and the sentences the others said were through our heart.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English