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The text below is an answer for Writing Task 1 (to my regret, I am not able to post the chart here).

I would be grateful for any corrections (grammar, vocabulary, style, punctuation, etc.) and advice.

The number of men occupied in full-time education fluctuated during the three periods.

The highest number was in 1970/71, then it dropped sharply in 1980/81 and grew slightly in 1990/91.

The number of women in full-time education constantly increased.

In 1970/71 and 1980/81 the number of men in full-time education was higher than the number of women, however in 1990/91 the number of women was significantly higher than the number of men.

As for the part-time education, the number of people occupied there was always much lower than number of those occupied in full-time education.

Still the dynamics of numbers of both men and women in part-time education shows constant growth.

There were more men than women in part-time education in 1970/71, in 1980/81 the number of men was slightly lower than the number of women and in 1990/91 the numbers of men and women were equal.

Overall, there is an upward trend in the numbers of women occupied in all forms of education.