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Chenhang (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

  • Nice to meet you!

    • My Chinese name is Chenhang.I'm a native speaker of Chinese.
    • It's a great honor for me to make friends with you.
    • Maybe I'm supposed to introduce myself that I am sophomore in Unibersity of International Relations in Beijing.
    • And I'm really interested in Germany and its culture and people of kindness there.
    • Because I have determined to go on my postgraduate in this place.
    • Of course,as a friendly Chinese I'd like to offer an assistance to your Chinese as well.
    • Even if you want to pay visit to Peking somehow, I can also show around this beautiful place.
    • In addtion, I have already arrange for my journey to Germany this summer in order to provide a chance of knowing well of this country for myself, which may produce a premise to my further study there.
    • Finally, it is geniunely hoped that we can become friends!

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    • Maybe I'm supposed to introduce myself that I am sophomore in Unibersity of International Relations in Beijing.
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    • Maybe I'm supposed to introduce myself that. I am a sophomore in the Unibversity of International Relations in Beijing.
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    • Of course,as a friendly Chinese I'd like to offer an assistance to your Chinese as well.
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    • Of course,as a friendly Chinese girl, I'd like to offer anmy assistance to your Chinese as wellinterest in learning Chinese.
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    • Even if you want to pay visit to Peking somehow, I can also show around this beautiful place.
      투표하세요!
    • EvWhen if you want toyou'll pay visit to Peking somehow, I can alstime, I'd like to show you around this beautiful place.
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    • In addtion, I have already arrange for my journey to Germany this summer in order to provide a chance of knowing well of this country for myself, which may produce a premise to my further study there.
      투표하세요!
    • In addtion, I have already arrange for my journey to Germany this summer in order to provide a chance of knowing well of this country for myself, which may produce a premise toto have the opportunity to exlpore(to become familiar) and to learn as much about this country which will add as a benefit for my further studyies there.
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