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    • "Alchemist" was written by Pauio Coelho in 1988 and is a novel set in 17'th sentry in Spain and North Africa.
  • It is the best novel by Paulo Coelho and is an international bestseller.
    • The story is about a young shepherd Santiago from the south of Span, who has a recurring dream about finding a treasure.
    • Believing that finding this treasure is his destiny he leaves his home and travels into the African desert to find it.
    • And meet a lot of dangers and obstacles on a way to his target.
    • The plot is full of motivational quotes, thinking about life and people values.
    • Another criticism, plot can move into religious at times, talking quite in depth about God and heaven etc., so dispending on your own beliefs it could be a downside.
    • The main character Santiago is not only committed to his dream, but also sometimes doubts and wanted to give up.
    • To sum up, the book is an exciting story, which able to change the lives of everyone in the best way.
    • You should really read it if you like feel-good stories, enjoy a short read or you respond well to stories that teach you what you already know in a different way.

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    • "Alchemist" was written by Pauio Coelho in 1988 and is a novel set in 17'th sentry in Spain and North Africa.
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    • "Alchemist" was written by Pauio Coelho in 1988 and is a novel set in 17'th scentury in Spain and North Africa.
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    • The story is about a young shepherd Santiago from the south of Span, who has a recurring dream about finding a treasure.
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    • The story is about a young shepherd named Santiago from the south of Span, whoin. He has a recurring dream about finding a treasure.
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    • Believing that finding this treasure is his destiny he leaves his home and travels into the African desert to find it.
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    • BHe believinges that finding this treasure is his destiny h. He leaves his home and travels into the African desert to find it.
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    • Another criticism, plot can move into religious at times, talking quite in depth about God and heaven etc., so dispending on your own beliefs it could be a downside.
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    • Another One criticism, is that the plot can move into religiousn at times, talking quite in depth about God and heaven etc., so dis So, depending on your own beliefs, it could be a downside.
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    • The main character Santiago is not only committed to his dream, but also sometimes doubts and wanted to give up.
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    • The main character, Santiago, is not only committed to his dream, but also sometimes has doubts about it and wanted to give up.
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    • To sum up, the book is an exciting story, which able to change the lives of everyone in the best way.
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    • To sum up, the book is an exciting story, which about being able to change the lives of everyone in the best way.
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    • You should really read it if you like feel-good stories, enjoy a short read or you respond well to stories that teach you what you already know in a different way.
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    • You should really read it if you like feel-good stories, enjoy a short read or you respond well to stories that teach you what you already know in a different way. [Excellent sentence here! Well done!]
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