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  • Travelling is important

    • Why most people like to travel?
    • In my view, it's because travelling helps you make acquaintances with different people from other countries.
    • You can really widen your scope learning about their traditions and life styles.
  • Eventually, travelling is so interesting!
  • You can see lots of astounding places, watch rare birds flying.
  • Travelling can make a difference to your life!
  • Where you would like to go on your holidays?
    • You know I've been abroad one time in my life.
  • I was two years old then.Naturally, I forgot this experience.
  • So I wish to go to some foreign country on my holidays.
  • I think visiting Great Britain turns me on. Why Britain?
  • Just because I've been learning English for 7 years already!
    • I need to practise my speaking skills anyway.
    • Besides, I'm a big lover of Britain weather.
  • It's always foggy, windy and rainy there.
    • Most people dislike this weather conditions.
  • Some of them even feel bad when it rains.
    • But I see only positive signs of this weather.
    • You can wrap yourself round a blanket, read an interesting book and drink hot tea looking out of your window. That's cool !
    • What means of transport is the best for travelling, why?
    • In my opinion, the best venicle while travelling is a car as you can notice everything on your way.
  • You may hear insects buzz and see, for instance a river, that flows not like other rivers do.
    • Moreover, automobile is safer than plane at any rate.
  • Some are frightened by plane crashes.
    • Nobody can deny that car accidents occur not as often as plane ones.

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