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  • MACBETH PLEASE HELP ME

  • Please, can you help me ?
  • Here is my text : Ladies and gentlemen, an intolerable event is about to occur if we don't take the necessary measures.
    • Indeed, I managed to intercept a letter of the utmost importance, which provides an imminent murder, which worries me extremely, and which concerns the whole country.
  • In this abominable letter full of machiavellianism, whose author is the young and ambitious Lady Macbeth, she asks, or rather orders, her husband, to the brave Macbeth, to kill our King Duncan in order to be king instead of him asking him "to be the serpent under an innocent flower", in others words she orders him to be hypocritical and playing a double game.
  • But how can a man so rash it to be governed by his wife? By a woman!
  • Since when can a woman take such important decisions ?
  • I think it's totally abnormal, she seems to be the female version of a man seeking greatness.
  • Why does she not perform the murder herself?
  • I know the answer, it's because she hides behind her husband to play it safe and do not have to shoulder the consequences if it were to go wrong.
  • We can deduce that she is also a coward.
  • As a matter of fact, be dominated by a woman and can only be explained by a deep love of Macbeth which is considerably blinded by the manipulative behavior of Lady McBeth which caused him to lose the notion of morals.
  • Indeed, Macbeth, upide and bewitched by his evil passion and destructice, is madly in love and could commit the irreparable.
  • Therefore, we must act quickly, because Lady MacBeth used her husband's fragility to quench her thirst for power and to achieve its ends.
  • From now on, she plays on the reversal of roles, she has adopted the role of "man of action," forcing her husband into the more passive role of accomplice.
  • Besides, I read in the letter that King Duncan is going to visit the Macbeths in their castle tomorrow night.
  • Thereby, we have to prevent this tragic event promptly that is why I denounce this premeditated murder which evidence is in my hands, in order to punished Lady MacBeth for being too bold and to have manipulated our poor and dear MacBeth who could have been about to commit an act of the most unworthies by her fault !
  • She deserves to be punished for his insane projects and thanks to this letter intercepted two lives have been saved: that of King Duncan and of Macbeth, who would have been eaten away by guilt.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Here is my text : Ladies and gentlemen, an intolerable event is about to occur if we don't take the necessary measures.
      Vote now!
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    • Indeed, I managed to intercept a letter of the utmost importance, which provides an imminent murder, which worries me extremely, and which concerns the whole country.
      Vote now!
    • Indeed, I managed to intercept a letter of the utmost importance, which provides details of an imminent murder, which worries me extremely, and which concerns the whole country.
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    • In this abominable letter full of machiavellianism, whose author is the young and ambitious Lady Macbeth, she asks, or rather orders, her husband, to the brave Macbeth, to kill our King Duncan in order to be king instead of him asking him "to be the serpent under an innocent flower", in others words she orders him to be hypocritical and playing a double game.
      Vote now!
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    • I know the answer, it's because she hides behind her husband to play it safe and do not have to shoulder the consequences if it were to go wrong.
      Vote now!
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    • As a matter of fact, be dominated by a woman and can only be explained by a deep love of Macbeth which is considerably blinded by the manipulative behavior of Lady McBeth which caused him to lose the notion of morals.
      Vote now!
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    • Indeed, Macbeth, upide and bewitched by his evil passion and destructice, is madly in love and could commit the irreparable.
      Vote now!
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    • Therefore, we must act quickly, because Lady MacBeth used her husband's fragility to quench her thirst for power and to achieve its ends.
      Vote now!
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    • From now on, she plays on the reversal of roles, she has adopted the role of "man of action," forcing her husband into the more passive role of accomplice.
      Vote now!
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    • Thereby, we have to prevent this tragic event promptly that is why I denounce this premeditated murder which evidence is in my hands, in order to punished Lady MacBeth for being too bold and to have manipulated our poor and dear MacBeth who could have been about to commit an act of the most unworthies by her fault !
      Vote now!
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    • She deserves to be punished for his insane projects and thanks to this letter intercepted two lives have been saved: that of King Duncan and of Macbeth, who would have been eaten away by guilt.
      Vote now!
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