添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

iris2huyenからのテキスト - English

    • how can learn effective english ?

    • I am Huyen, i'm Vietnames!
    • I very happy to make my friends in around the world.
    • Although my english is limited,but i will try to improve it in the next time.
    • I hope i have a lot of friends... and I want every people told to me how to learn english the most effective...., how to make sentence,how to speak, how to write, how to listent....that is a secret.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English