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Text from Symmons - English

  • 30.1

    • I went to work, yesterday they are changing the times so we started at 10 am until 8 pm.
    • Just before going I went to the post office to collect my item : my watch, a cashmere socks, BD and chocolate for April that Mum sent me.
    • After collected my item I hurried on the road to reach the work in time because I was busy again.
    • Working in the A case again, I had a review with the shift manager in the office and she said that everything is alright with me but I need to get faster at stacking because as many others people I am in the red performance sometimes, I reply that they have to buy new guns and scanners because they doesn't work properly and I am not able to work comfortable with that stuff.
    • After 7 pm we left the A case to the other warehouse to pick small items.
    • After working I went back home and enjoyed my dinner and relaxing with a bottle of cider.

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  • Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • Just before going I went to the post office to collect my item : my watch, a cashmere socks, BD and chocolate for April that Mum sent me.
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    • Just before going I went to the post office to collect my items : my watch, a cashmere socks, BD and chocolate for April that Mum had sent me.
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  • Sentence 4
    • Working in the A case again, I had a review with the shift manager in the office and she said that everything is alright with me but I need to get faster at stacking because as many others people I am in the red performance sometimes, I reply that they have to buy new guns and scanners because they doesn't work properly and I am not able to work comfortable with that stuff.
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    • Working in the A case again, I had a review with the shift manager in the office and she said that everything is all right with me but I need to get faster at stacking because aslike many others people I am in the red performance sometimes,. I replyied that they have to buy new guns and scanners because they doesn't work properly and I am not able to work comfortabley with that stuff.
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