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Music
Hi!
- I am just starting to learn English.
My name is Alex.
- I play guitar, piano and compose music.
- I have rock band.
- My band name is "ElliSmith" Thank you for attention!

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- I am just starting to learn English.
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- I play guitar, piano and compose music.
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- I have rock band.
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- I have a rock band.
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- My band name is "ElliSmith" Thank you for attention!
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- My band name is "ElliSmith" ¶Thank you for your attention! ¶
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