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Testo da ajulyav - English

  • Technology

    • People should be more independent from modern technologies, because they can influence negatively on the ability to think.
    • Today a real problem is that a lot of people cannot remember dates, names or addresses.
    • Moreover, it is known that the yong use their phones and special applications to save important events in to-do lists.
    • If to take into account that people did not use any technologies a few years ago, it is possible to say that they could keep in their heads more information than today's people.
    • Furthermore, to rely on technology in everyday life can be the main reason, why it is getting more difficult to calculate numbers without using programmes.
    • Researchers show that more than fifty percent of students in High Schools face a problem of calculating numbers in mind.
    • But it would be unfair to say that technologies have only negative affect on people's life.
    • A lot of research works are based on big massiv of information.
  • For instance, such field as Big Data is very popular nowadays.
    • The analysis of this field can help to find answers on many actual problems, for example, changing the climate on Earth, prediction various situations, calculating previous data.
  • It would not be possible to calculate these tasks without using computers.
    • To summary, technologies are becoming an integral part of human life, more and more people rely on them.
    • But many of people do not even think, that excessive using of everyday gadgets and applications can be a real problem, because it deteriorate the ability of humans to think for themselves.

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    • People should be more independent from modern technologies, because they can influence negatively on the ability to think.
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    • PI think people should be more independent ofrom modern technologies,y because they can influence negatively on the excessive use of technology can have a negative influence on your ability to think.
    • People should be more independent from modern technologies, because they can influence negatively on their ability to think.
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    • If to take into account that people did not use any technologies a few years ago, it is possible to say that they could keep in their heads more information than today's people.
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    • If to takeTaking into account the fact that people did non't use any modern technologies a few yearsy not so long ago, it is possible to say that they could keep in their headsretain more information than today's people today.
    • If towe take into account the fact that people did not use any technologies a few years ago, it is possible to say that they could keep in their heads more information than today's peoplein their heads than that of today's generation.
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    • Furthermore, to rely on technology in everyday life can be the main reason, why it is getting more difficult to calculate numbers without using programmes.
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    • Furthermore, to relyoverreliance on technology in one's everyday life can be the main reason, why it is getting more difficult todoing basic calculate numberions without using programmesthe aid of a calculator is proving more and more difficult for the modern person.
    • Furthermore, to rely on technology in our everyday life can be the main reason, why it is gett of having more difficulty to calculate numbers without using programmes.
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    • Researchers show that more than fifty percent of students in High Schools face a problem of calculating numbers in mind.
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    • Researchers show thatAccording to researchers, more than fifty percent of students in Hhigh Sschools face a pare having troublem ofs calculating numbers in their mind.
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    • The analysis of this field can help to find answers on many actual problems, for example, changing the climate on Earth, prediction various situations, calculating previous data.
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    • The analysis of this field can help to find answers on many actual problems, for example, changing the climate change on Earth, prediction of various situations, calculating previous data.
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    • But many of people do not even think, that excessive using of everyday gadgets and applications can be a real problem, because it deteriorate the ability of humans to think for themselves.
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    • But many of these people do not even think, that excessive usinge of everyday gadgets and applications can be a real problem, because it deteriorates the ability of humans to think for themselves.
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