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  • About my everyday life

    • My name is Artem, i'm 20 years old and I work as system administrator in office.
  • My job is too boring in my opinion.
    • I have lived so active and funny cause every day something interesting happend to me.
    • But earlier i noticed that my life seems to have stopped.
    • It's sad when you young guy with a lot of ideas and energy but you should sit in the office and watch how other young people live.
    • As most of people who visit this website i like travelling and new contacts but i haven't time and money for these, that's why i can just dream about my future.

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    • It's sad when you young guy with a lot of ideas and energy but you should sit in the office and watch how other young people live.
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    • It's sad when youthere are young guys with a lot of ideas and energy but you shouldhave to sit in the office and watch how other young people live.
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    • It's sad when you are a young guy with a lot of ideas and loads of energy but you shouldhave to sit in the office and watch how other young people live.
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    • As most of people who visit this website i like travelling and new contacts but i haven't time and money for these, that's why i can just dream about my future.
      투표하세요!
    • As with most of the people who visit this website i, I like travelling and new contactmaking new friends but iI haven't got the time and money for these, that's why iI can justonly dream about my future. ¶
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture 댓글
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    • AsLike most of people who visit this website iI like travelling and making new contacts but iI haven't the time and money for these, that's why iI can justonly dream about my future. ¶
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      투표하세요!
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