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    • I can describe myself with a sentence that is a woman who want to get pleasure out of life.I try to make real these words in my lifetime.What I want to explain that I like exploring new tastes, new places, different cultures and also being physically active.I am interested in extreme sports like flying.When I am doing these sports I can feel myself with the increasing level of adrenalin.In addition to this, I have sufficent number of friends.I am really finicky when I am choosing my friends.This is because,I don't want to waste of my life with the wrong people, so their personalities match up with mine.They are friendly, ambitious, sociable and happy.Especially in weekends, we spend a lot of time together and enjoy the life.I also take care myself with a good lifestyle.I follow a healthy diet with doing sports like tennis.At the same time, I improve myself mentally, by reading good books and listening to quality music.Briefly, I believe that life is a gift, so we should catch the moment with the greatful memories.

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