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    • Would you like to see wild animals without spending much money on trips!
    • If you would, zoo is a perfect solution for you.
    • You can go there at any time you like and see any animal you like too!
    • For people who like wild animals, zoo has become a real paradise!
    • But what are advantages and disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos?

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