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Some people think sports can build one's character.
- There is no secret that many people expect sports to build their characters.
- For instance I know a woman who makes her son do boxing.
- He is often teased at school and not capable of protecting himself from being beaten up.
- So she hopes he will be taught to hit back.
- Will her wish come true?
- In my view it will because doing any sport helps people to be more confident and persistent.
- I believe that guy will learn to be braver.
- I'm sure he will be a man of decision.
- Probably it'll be very difficult to to inflict someone's views upon him.
- He will be able to venture on bald steps.
- He can be respected by his friends and family.
- But there is another side of the coin.
- Who guarantees he won't get selfish?
- One day he can be seen standing in front of a mirror for hours.
- What will he think about?
- Maybe "How good I am!"or something like that.
- In fact sports will make him more stubborn and healthier but also egoistic.
- Perhaps he will think everybody must admire him.
- So what conclusion may be made?
- Sports can teach people not to be shy about anything but it's necessary that one should not overdo sports.
- Wejo
January 2016
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