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  • The table chart illustrates

    • the employment sectors (agriculture, manufacturing, catering, local government, health, retail, law, accountancy, education and other) in which some people from 3 different age groups worked.
    • (Units are measured in a indefinite scale.) Overall, the employment sector which had most people was manufacturing with a sum of 50.
  • While, the lowest was accountancy with 8 people.
    • Other sector with an high value is retail (36) and health (39).
  • Secondly, The age group with more workers was 40-65 years old with a sum of 60.
  • Whereas, the lowest was 18-25 years old (38).
    • In the 40-65 age group the employment sector with more workers was manufacturing (23), instead of 18-25 age groups who was concentrated in retail (23).
    • While, in each age group the lowest number of workers was in accountancy sector with the respecting values of 3 people 18-25 years, 2 people 25-40 years old and 3 people 40-65 years old.

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    • the employment sectors (agriculture, manufacturing, catering, local government, health, retail, law, accountancy, education and other) in which some people from 3 different age groups worked.
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    • tThe employment sectors (agriculture, manufacturing, catering, local government, health, retail, law, accountancy, education and other) in which some people from 3 different age groups worked.
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    • (Units are measured in a indefinite scale.) Overall, the employment sector which had most people was manufacturing with a sum of 50.
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    • (Units are measured ion an indefinite scale.)¶¶Overall, the employment sector which had mostthe most number of people was manufacturing with a sum of 50.
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    • In the 40-65 age group the employment sector with more workers was manufacturing (23), instead of 18-25 age groups who was concentrated in retail (23).
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    • In the 40-65 age group the employment sector with more workers was manufacturing (23), instead of 18-25 age groups whoich was concentrated in retail (23).
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    • While, in each age group the lowest number of workers was in accountancy sector with the respecting values of 3 people 18-25 years, 2 people 25-40 years old and 3 people 40-65 years old.
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    • While, in each age group the lowest number of workers was in the accountancy sector with the respectingve values of 3 people in 18-25 years, 2 people in 25-40 years old and 3 people in 40-65 years old.
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