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    • hello, it's my first time with publishing what's my thoughts actually it's my first Sharing any text.
    • so as we all know that middle east has a lot of wars and hate.
    • i think that all of that happened because of politicians and Media so, if politics brings hate and angry , why don't we keep our political thoughts to ourself, why we need to force people to believe in our thoughts, can you imagine life without political wars.
    • for me i think we will have peace (not governments peace) but people peace between eachother. thank you.

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    • i think that all of that happened because of politicians and Media so, if politics brings hate and angry , why don't we keep our political thoughts to ourself, why we need to force people to believe in our thoughts, can you imagine life without political wars.
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    • ¶iI think that all of that happened because of politicians and Mmedia¶s.¶So, if politics brings hatered and angery , why don't we keep our political thoughts to ourself, wves ? Why we need to force people to believe in our thoughts, c. Can you imagine life without political wars.
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    • ¶iI think that all of that happened because of politicians and Media¶so, ithe media. If politics brings hatered and angery , why don't we keep our political thoughts to ourself, why we need toves? Why must we force people to believe in our thoughts, c? Can you imagine life without political wars.?
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    • for me i think we will have peace (not governments peace) but people peace between eachother. thank you.
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