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    • Today is 30th November, today is the Xiomy's birthday my girlfriend, because, today I will make a cake for her, She likes the strawberries and chocolate then It will be a vanilla cake with chocolate coverage and strawberries.
    • Also, I bought a teddy, a necklace and earrings for her, I hope that she likes it.

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    • Today is 30th November, today is the Xiomy's birthday my girlfriend, because, today I will make a cake for her, She likes the strawberries and chocolate then It will be a vanilla cake with chocolate coverage and strawberries.
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    • Today is the 30th of November, today is the Xiomy's birthday my girlfriend, because, tand it is my girlfriend Xiomy's birthday. Today I will make a cake for her,. ¶She likes the strawberries and chocolate then Iso it will be a vanilla cake with chocolate coverageicing and strawberries.
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