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- sunday afternoon
- Hey Today it's raining outside but i want to go walk for exercices I'm new on this website and i want to learn english in an other way that i used to .
- so i just wrote this as my first text to try the site I hope it's correct

sophie68January 2016100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Hey Today it's raining outside but i want to go walk for exercices I'm new on this website and i want to learn english in an other way that i used to .
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- Hey ¶Today it's raining outside but iI want to go ~~walk for~~out for a walk to do some exercicses.¶I'm new on this website and iI want to learn eEnglish in ansome other way that iI am used to .
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- Hey ¶Today, it's raining outside but iI want to go walk for do exercices.¶I'm a new member on this website and iI want to learn eEnglish in some an other way that iI am used to .
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- so i just wrote this as my first text to try the site I hope it's correct
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- ¶sSo iI just wroite this as my first text to try ~~the~~in this site .¶I hope it's will be correct ly
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