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    • Participation by 5 to 14 years old in selected leisure activiti

    • Participation by 5 to 14 years old in selected leisure activities (Australia).
  • The Chart illustrates the percentage of Australian boys and girls who spent their time in five different activities (Skate boarding, bike riding, watching tv, computer games, art craft).
    • Overall, one hundred percent of boys and girls watch tv.
    • More boys than girls practice activities as skating (forty percent), bike riding (seventy-five percent) and game playing (eighty percent).
    • Instead, more girls than boys are used to spend time on art and craft.
    • Furthermore, it seems that boys partecipate in more activities than girls, In fact in four of the five activities they are more than girls.
    • The boys activity least practice is art and craft (thirty-five percent), while the girls are less used to skate (almost thirty percent).
  • The biggest difference is in art and craft, which sixty percent of girls are used to spend time on them, against just a thirty-five percent of boys.

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    • The Chart illustrates the percentage of Australian boys and girls who spent their time in five different activities (Skate boarding, bike riding, watching tv, computer games, art craft).
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    • More boys than girls practice activities as skating (forty percent), bike riding (seventy-five percent) and game playing (eighty percent).
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    • More number of boys than girls practice activities such as skating (forty percent), bike riding (seventy-five percent) and game playing games (eighty percent).
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    • Furthermore, it seems that boys partecipate in more activities than girls, In fact in four of the five activities they are more than girls.
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    • Furthermore, it seems that boys parteicipate in more activities than girls,. In fact in four of the five activities they are more in number than girls.
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    • The boys activity least practice is art and craft (thirty-five percent), while the girls are less used to skate (almost thirty percent).
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    • The boys practivityce the least practice isvity of art and craft (thirty-five percent), while the girls are less used to skateing (almost thirty percent).
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    • The biggest difference is in art and craft, which sixty percent of girls are used to spend time on them, against just a thirty-five percent of boys.
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