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  • Estimated Percentage of car trips by Purpose and Gender

    • Estimated Percentage of car trips by Purpose and Gender of drivers in 2005 The Chart illustrates the percentage of car usage for each activity (Course, Visiting town, bank, running errands, visiting friends, recreation, work and shopping) for women and men.
    • Overall, both men and women use car most of their time for going to work.
  • But at the same time it’s also the activity with the most difference.
    • In fact men spend almost fifty per cent of their time for work.
    • Instead, women for just the forty percent.
    • Other activities where men use car more than woman are recreation (around ten percent) and visiting town (almost ten percent), instead women are used to make commissions and they use the car more than men for courses (more than ten percent), bank (about ten percent), running errands (ten percent) and shopping (almost twenty percent).
    • On the other hand, men are used to spend just less than five percent of their car usage going to the bank, while the least value for women is around three percent about visiting the town.

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    • Estimated Percentage of car trips by Purpose and Gender of drivers in 2005 The Chart illustrates the percentage of car usage for each activity (Course, Visiting town, bank, running errands, visiting friends, recreation, work and shopping) for women and men.
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    • EThe Chart illustrates the estimated Ppercentage of car trips by Ppurpose and Ggender of drivers in 2005¶¶The Chart illustrate. It also shows the percentage of car usage for each activity (between men and women which includes: Course, Visiting tTown, bGoing to the Bank, rRunning eErrands, vVisiting fFriend's, rRecreation, wWork and sShopping) for women and men.
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    • Other activities where men use car more than woman are recreation (around ten percent) and visiting town (almost ten percent), instead women are used to make commissions and they use the car more than men for courses (more than ten percent), bank (about ten percent), running errands (ten percent) and shopping (almost twenty percent).
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    • Other activities where men use cars more than woman areinclude: recreation (around ten percent) and visiting town (almost ten percent), instead women are used to make commissiongiving commands and they use the cars more than men for courses (more than ten percent), going to the bank (about ten percent), running errands (ten percent) and shopping (almost twenty percent).
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    • On the other hand, men are used to spend just less than five percent of their car usage going to the bank, while the least value for women is around three percent about visiting the town.
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    • On the other hand, men are used to spending just less than five percent of their car usage goingto go to the bank, while the least value for women is around three percent abouto visiting the town. ¶
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