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Hello
Hello!
- Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
- If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

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- Hello
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Is there someone who could help me to correct an English text ?
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- Is there ~~some~~anyone who could help me to correct an Eenglish text ?
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- Is there someone who could help me toby correcting an English text ?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- If you can you can send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !
  赶紧投票吧！
- If you can ~~you can~~ send me a private message, the text is a bit long and I can't write it all here, I divided it in two parts but nobody answered .. Thanks !
  PatrikS 评论
  
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  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3