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  • The idea of progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change – a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place.
  • If a country could represent this evolution, we need to talk about India and her incredible story.
  • India is now one of the most important country in the world Progress implies some changes, some evolution from an old order with old traditions to a new order.
    • Why is India a country on the move ?
    • India developed a very competitive industry.
  • In the domain of new technologies, India have an important place In fact, the Indian economy is the 10th in the world global nominal domestic product (GDP), thanks to the creation of high-tech cities such as Bangalore, Hyderabad and Cyberabad as we’ve seen in class,in the record named « High tech cities ».
  • Those cities are the main reason why the economic sector has known a growth of 8% annually since 2004.
    • Indian women were so poor an had no financial assistance.
  • To help women, the system of microcredit was created.It has enabled women to take loans for the purpose to help women to start their own business.But,their daily salary is so low that despite having so many loans, they can't repay.
  • The money borrow just helps them to get by from day to day instead of allowing them to set up their own business.
  • The text Changing India shows the tremendous changes in the recent years.
    • At the economic level,Indian companies can compete with foreign companies.
  • There are progress in social domain.
  • For exemple, couples can divorce and before it was poorly looked.Nowadays, there is progress in the sector of education : children can go to school and even to college.There is change in mentalities and Indian is in a new state of mind, they are more confident and hopeful.They can hold of their destinies.

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    • The idea of progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change – a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place.
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    • India is now one of the most important country in the world Progress implies some changes, some evolution from an old order with old traditions to a new order.
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    • In the domain of new technologies, India have an important place In fact, the Indian economy is the 10th in the world global nominal domestic product (GDP), thanks to the creation of high-tech cities such as Bangalore, Hyderabad and Cyberabad as we’ve seen in class,in the record named « High tech cities ».
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    • To help women, the system of microcredit was created.It has enabled women to take loans for the purpose to help women to start their own business.But,their daily salary is so low that despite having so many loans, they can't repay.
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    • For exemple, couples can divorce and before it was poorly looked.Nowadays, there is progress in the sector of education : children can go to school and even to college.There is change in mentalities and Indian is in a new state of mind, they are more confident and hopeful.They can hold of their destinies.
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