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    • Happy New Year 2016!

    • I'm from quang nam province in vietnam, where has two world heritage of unesco (hoi an old town and my son sanctuary)!
    • I think your country also have more beautiful place, so why you do not tell me now...
    • Hihi I'm talk not much but write more.
    • I only like show action more than talk so much and do not do anything.
    • I want to learn english and japanese.
    • I like cooking, love cats and dogs and chicken so much, social activities, ride bike, chat chit when i have free time, reading some good book, watch comedy movie, swimming, badminton, volleyball, travel and take care my family.
    • So i want make friendship with you who have more hobbies like me.
    • Even you do not have hobbies like me but you are serious and truth to make true friendship then say hello with me!
    • :) I am clumsy, not rich and also not good at anything but i am serious in friendship if you are a my good friends!
    • Write so much maybe you will do not believe, hello me now! :)

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    • I'm from quang nam province in vietnam, where has two world heritage of unesco (hoi an old town and my son sanctuary)!
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    • I'm from qQuang nNam province in vVietnam, where haswe have two wWorld hHeritage of uUnesco (hsites. Hoi, an old town and my son's sanctuary)!.
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    • I only like show action more than talk so much and do not do anything.
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    • I only like show action more than talk so much and do not do anything.¶¶I like to show more action than to talk too much and not do anything.
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    • I like cooking, love cats and dogs and chicken so much, social activities, ride bike, chat chit when i have free time, reading some good book, watch comedy movie, swimming, badminton, volleyball, travel and take care my family.
      투표하세요!
    • I like cooking,. I also love cats and, dogs, and chicken so much,s. ¶¶I like social activities,. I like to ride my bike, chat chit when i have free time, reading somea good book, watching comedy movies, swimming, badminton, volleyball, travel and to take care my family.
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    • Even you do not have hobbies like me but you are serious and truth to make true friendship then say hello with me!
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    • ¶¶Even if you do non't have hobbies like me butthe same hobbies as me, if you are serious and truthful, and would like to make a true friendship then say hello withto me!
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    • :) I am clumsy, not rich and also not good at anything but i am serious in friendship if you are a my good friends!
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    • :)¶I am clumsy, not rich, and also not good at anything but i. I am serious in friendships however. Especially if you are a my good friends!.
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