添削

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  • Composition

  • Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
  • Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
    • Once I read this this passage: "if truth is a loaf of bread and you pick up a crumb do you have the truth?
  • If not truth then it is worthless lie.........Truth is that there is no truth" After years I more and more agree with this passage.
    • Who can affirm: "I always say the truth", when the social rules impose to deliver half truth, at work, at social events and in other occasion we mask the truth or we say only half truth in order not to offend or to be rude (so we say the color of this dress is not right for you instead of you are too fat to wear this kind of dresses), with the half truth we obtain the same goal but we don't hurt or offend.
  • But where is the truth?
  • Saying half truth, giving scrums is an expedient everybody uses because everybody wants to be polite, wants to prevent the hurt that truth can provoke.
    • Most of people affirm they always want to say and to hear the truth to and from people they are surrounded but how many of the, of us are prepared to the impact a truth has?
  • The answer is nobody.
    • We learn since kids to hide and to dissimulate the truth: how many mothers stopped their children saying what they really thought or made some excuses to cover what they said?

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English