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    • However, as long as the US refer to itself as a democratic free country, it doesn’t matter how powerful they are, they will always need the general consent of a population which is not precisely very fond of imperialism.
    • So when it comes to convince them, it is when propaganda and the exaltation of the American exceptionalism ideology have a decisive importance for the elites. Dwight D.
    • Eisenhower warned the U.S. in 1961, now it is too late: At this moment the US is the country which expends the most in the military (even during times of financial crisis); the military industrial complex now is too big and lucrative to be stopped.
    • They are going to keep selling arms and expanding American bases around the world and particularly in the Middle East because it’s geo-strategic position and its natural resources.
    • The US is exceptional in the way that they can commit war crimes and overthrow democratically elected governments but none can do so or blame the US

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    • However, as long as the US refer to itself as a democratic free country, it doesn’t matter how powerful they are, they will always need the general consent of a population which is not precisely very fond of imperialism.
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    • However, as long as the US refers to itself as a democratic free country, it doesn’t matter how powerful they are, theyit is, as it will always need the general consent of a population - a population which is not precisely very fond of imperialism.
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    • So when it comes to convince them, it is when propaganda and the exaltation of the American exceptionalism ideology have a decisive importance for the elites. Dwight D.
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    • So when it comes to convinceing them, it is when general population, propaganda and the exaltation of the American exceptionalism ideology have aare decisively importancet for the elites. Dwight D.
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    • Eisenhower warned the U.S. in 1961, now it is too late: At this moment the US is the country which expends the most in the military (even during times of financial crisis); the military industrial complex now is too big and lucrative to be stopped.
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    • Eisenhower warned the U.S. in 1961, now; however, it is too late: now. At this moment, the US ihas the country which expends the most in the military (biggest military expenditure, even during times ofhe financial crisis); t. The military industrial complex now ishas become too big and too lucrative to be stopped.
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    • They are going to keep selling arms and expanding American bases around the world and particularly in the Middle East because it’s geo-strategic position and its natural resources.
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    • They are going to keep selling arms and expanding American bases around the world and, particularly in the Middle East, because of it’s geo-strategic position and its natural resources.
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    • The US is exceptional in the way that they can commit war crimes and overthrow democratically elected governments but none can do so or blame the US
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    • The US is exceptional in the way that they can commit war crimes and overthrow democratically -elected governments, but none can do so or other country can do the same, or even blame the US.
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