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- The day began to arrive in the evening and I decided to find a suitable place for my tent.
- I walked more 20 minutes when I saw beautifully suiting place under the birch which is front of the forest, and it is a bit higher level with rest area.
- I thought it would be nice seeing on the mouth of the tent when sunset began.
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Setning 1
- The day began to arrive in the evening and I decided to find a suitable place for my tent.
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- The day began to ~~arrive in~~end towards the evening and I decided to find a suitable place for my tent.
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Setning 2
- I walked more 20 minutes when I saw beautifully suiting place under the birch which is front of the forest, and it is a bit higher level with rest area.
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- I walked ~~mor~~some 20 minutes more when I saw a beautifully suit~~ing~~able place under the birch which is in front of the forest, and ~~it is a~~which was at a bit higher level ~~with rest~~than with the rest of the area.
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Setning 3
- I thought it would be nice seeing on the mouth of the tent when sunset began.
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- I thought it would be nice ~~seeing on the mouth~~to see from the opening of the tent ~~when~~during sunset ~~began~~.
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- To be continued.
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