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- The foggy was scattered a little by little when I was reached outside of the city.
- The sky cleared up, and had seen a little bit of sunshine peeping from behind the clouds like playing a peak-a-boo.
- I decided just go stright not to take any purpose to destination and go approximately one day way then camping and then will be decided when I wake up with fresh and full of energy what to do next.
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Setning 1
- The foggy was scattered a little by little when I was reached outside of the city.
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- The foggy was scattered a little by little when I ~~was~~ reached outside of the city.
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- The sky cleared up, and had seen a little bit of sunshine peeping from behind the clouds like playing a peak-a-boo.
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- The sky cleared up, and th~~ad se~~en a little bit of sunshine peep~~ing~~ed from behind the clouds like playing a peak-a-boo.
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- I decided just go stright not to take any purpose to destination and go approximately one day way then camping and then will be decided when I wake up with fresh and full of energy what to do next.
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- I decided to just go straight and not to take any ~~purpose to destination and~~other work towards the destination. And then to go approximately one day ~~way then~~to camping a. And then ~~will be decided~~ when I wake up ~~with~~ ,fresh and full of energy, I will decide what to do next.
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- To be continued.
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