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Hi, i'm Ivica and i would like someone to check my English, rate it and correct me if i was wrong in writing. Thnaks

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- ~~My First Message~~Hi, I'm Ivica and I would like someone to check my English, rate it and correct it if i am wrong! Thanks
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