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    • I am interested in participating in the Youth Event to create a network of leading opinion-makers , build bridges in order to promote dialogue and understanding among peoples, cultures, religions and beliefs, and foster a culture of peace, tolerance and respect for diversity through cooperation and contribute to good governance and the rule of law with a view to protecting and respecting cultural diversity, religious freedom and pluralism ,Promotion of gender equality, equal enjoyment of human rights and equal opportunities for women and men.
    • I expect it will give me the experience through interactive workshops hosted by UNAOC Youth Event. refresh my skills and keep abreast of new tools and methodologies. this program provides a miraculous chance for me to improve my communicative skills. develop my leadership competencies and makes them better able to solve community problems and enhances my civic participation .

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    • I am interested in participating in the Youth Event to create a network of leading opinion-makers , build bridges in order to promote dialogue and understanding among peoples, cultures, religions and beliefs, and foster a culture of peace, tolerance and respect for diversity through cooperation and contribute to good governance and the rule of law with a view to protecting and respecting cultural diversity, religious freedom and pluralism ,Promotion of gender equality, equal enjoyment of human rights and equal opportunities for women and men.
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    • I am interested in participating in the Youth Event to create a network of leading opinion-makers ,; build bridges in order to promote dialogue and understanding among peoples, cultures, religions and beliefs, and; foster a culture of peace, tolerance and respect for diversity through cooperation and; contribute to good governance and the rule of law with a view to protecting and respecting cultural diversity, religious freedom and pluralism ,P; promotion ofe gender equality, equal enjoyment of human rights, and equal opportunities for women and men.
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    • I expect it will give me the experience through interactive workshops hosted by UNAOC Youth Event. refresh my skills and keep abreast of new tools and methodologies. this program provides a miraculous chance for me to improve my communicative skills. develop my leadership competencies and makes them better able to solve community problems and enhances my civic participation .
      투표하세요!
    • I expect it will give me the experience through interactive workshops hosted by UNAOC Youth Event., refresh my skills, and keep abreast of new tools and methodologies. tThis program provides a miraculous chance for me to improve my communicative skills., develop my leadership competencies and makes them better able, improve my abilities to solve community problems, and enhances my civic participation .
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