添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

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    • In theforeground of the picture you can see the big table with delishous dishes and different drinks .In the background you can see my grendparents are sitting in the cozy armcheres and making an order.In the middele the waiter is pouring wine to my grendfather.They looks very happy because we are celebrating the birthday of grendfather.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English

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    • In theforeground of the picture you can see the big table with delishous dishes and different drinks .In the background you can see my grendparents are sitting in the cozy armcheres and making an order.In the middele the waiter is pouring wine to my grendfather.They looks very happy because we are celebrating the birthday of grendfather.
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    • In the foreground of the picture you can see thea big table with delishcious dishes and different drinks . In the background you can see my greandparents are sitting in the cozy armchereairs and making an order. In the middelecenter the waiter is pouring wine into my greandfather's cup.They looks very happy because we are celebrating the birthday of grendfathermy grandfather's birthday.
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