添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Tatiana1680からのテキスト - English

  • My favourite film.

  • My favourite film is " Seven " directed by David Fincher.
    • This film about a serial killer and detectives.
    • It is thriller.
    • This film set in USA.
  • This story begins when the detective Juliam Somerset wants to retire.
    • Unknown serial killer kills people for their sin.
    • He kills people during a week: one day - one sin.
    • This film takes me food for thought.
    • I partially agree with serial killer.
    • On the one hand, I agree with him, but on the another hand I believe that killer don`t right.
    • First of all, the killer thinks that he select.
    • He kills people and enjoys this.
  • I think that it is not right.
    • Secondly, he himself became sin.
    • This means that he was not select.
    • I`m upset that Mils (another detective) kill the killer because of this the killer win.
  • I don`t agree with Mils.
    • T think that I don`t kill the killer.
  • In my opinion, the killer should be in prison and suffer.
    • I recommend this film everybody because it is violent and informative.
    • It takes food for thought for everybody.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English