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    • Hi, friends) please, help me to check this motivation letter

    • Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of a Teacher at your language school.
    • The vacancy came to my knowledge from INTESOL Company, located in Vladivostok, Russia.
  • I am currently completing my Master’s degree at the Amur State University in Russia with a major in linguistics and pedagogics.
    • Throughout getting my Master’s degree and TESOL’ teacher education I gained the most important skills that improved my viewpoint and dedication to this particular profession.
    • Working as a tour guide in our city, I polished my interpersonal and communication skills while contacting with Chinese tourists (adults as well as kids).
    • Since my focus has centered in foreign language and teaching I am very enthusiastic about continuing the matter of all my life in a foreign country school.
    • My recent teaching experience during interning at the university allowed me to enhance my beliefs upon the teaching career and realise that I get pleasure from teaching as well as my students.
    • My main goal in this particular field is to do the best to motivate and incorporate students with English.
    • Despite small experience, I have some examples of encouraging students and creating a care and friendly atmosphere in a classroom.
  • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in person and discuss how my teaching and language skills can meet with the needs of your school and the results I can bring as a teacher.
    • Thank you for your time and consideration Yours sincerely,

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    • I am currently completing my Master’s degree at the Amur State University in Russia with a major in linguistics and pedagogics.
      투표하세요!
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    • Throughout getting my Master’s degree and TESOL’ teacher education I gained the most important skills that improved my viewpoint and dedication to this particular profession.
      투표하세요!
    • Throughout getting my Master’s degree and TESOL’ teacher education, I gained the most important skills that improved my viewpoint and dedication to this particular profession.
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      투표하세요!
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    • Working as a tour guide in our city, I polished my interpersonal and communication skills while contacting with Chinese tourists (adults as well as kids).
      투표하세요!
    • Working as a tour guide in our city, I polished my interpersonal and communication skills while contacmmunicating with Chinese tourists (adults as well as kids).
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    • Since my focus has centered in foreign language and teaching I am very enthusiastic about continuing the matter of all my life in a foreign country school.
      투표하세요!
    • Since my focus has centered ion foreign language and teaching I am very enthusiastic about continuing the matter ofis profession all my life in a foreign country school.
      AbbyTheGreenAbbyTheGreen profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Since my focus has been centered ion foreign language and teaching, I am very enthusiastic about continuing the matter ofis profession all my life in a foreign country school.
      MeinaMeina profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • My recent teaching experience during interning at the university allowed me to enhance my beliefs upon the teaching career and realise that I get pleasure from teaching as well as my students.
      투표하세요!
    • My recent teaching experience during an interningship at the university allowed me to enhance my beliefs upon the teaching career and realise that I get pleasure from teaching as well as my students.
      AbbyTheGreenAbbyTheGreen profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • My main goal in this particular field is to do the best to motivate and incorporate students with English.
      투표하세요!
    • My main goal in this particular field is to do the best to motivate and incorporatengage students with the English language.
      AbbyTheGreenAbbyTheGreen profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • Despite small experience, I have some examples of encouraging students and creating a care and friendly atmosphere in a classroom.
      투표하세요!
    • Despite smalllittle experience, I have some examples of encouraging students and creating a careing and friendly atmosphere in a classroom.
      AbbyTheGreenAbbyTheGreen profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in person and discuss how my teaching and language skills can meet with the needs of your school and the results I can bring as a teacher.
      투표하세요!
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