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    • I have been involved in volunteering , I volunteered with Art2Care in Children's Cancer Hospital Foundation 57357 to help children during the treatment period in art by the drawing To get out their feelings and their pain and we organized the first camp to Art Therapy in egypt .
    • I have been participated in Active Citizens program , I trained to affect social change in our communities And participate in workshops on sustainable development .we created a Initiative to teach children the need to preserve the environment.

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    • I have been involved in volunteering , I volunteered with Art2Care in Children's Cancer Hospital Foundation 57357 to help children during the treatment period in art by the drawing To get out their feelings and their pain and we organized the first camp to Art Therapy in egypt .
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    • I have been involved in volunteering ,. I volunteered with Art2Care in Children's Cancer Hospital Foundation 57357 to help children during their treatment period inwith art by the drawing Tto get out their feelings and their pain, and we organized the first camp to Art Therapy in eEgypt .
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    • I have been participated in Active Citizens program , I trained to affect social change in our communities And participate in workshops on sustainable development .we created a Initiative to teach children the need to preserve the environment.
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    • I have been participated in the Active Citizens program ,. I trained to affect social change in our communities Aand participate in workshops on sustainable development .w. We created an Initiative to teach children the need to preserve the environment.
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