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  • Earthships

    • I have reciently read a bit about earthships, eco- friendly structures designed to take advantage of both naturally ocurring resources and recycled materials.
    • There are some near I live, and I got surprised about the way they keep warmer in winter, and the way they approach the water.
    • In my opinion, i think that this kind of houses are a good idea, but I am not sure If they have similar commodities as a regular homes.
    • I will wait to see more models, and, perhaps, some day I will decide to try the experience!

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    • I have reciently read a bit about earthships, eco- friendly structures designed to take advantage of both naturally ocurring resources and recycled materials.
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    • I have reciently read a bit about earthships, eco- friendly structures designed to take advantage of both naturally occurring resources and recycled materials.
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    • There are some near I live, and I got surprised about the way they keep warmer in winter, and the way they approach the water.
      투표하세요!
    • There are some near where I live, and I gotwas surprised about the way they keep warmerth in winter, and the way they approach the water.
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    • In my opinion, i think that this kind of houses are a good idea, but I am not sure If they have similar commodities as a regular homes.
      투표하세요!
    • In my opinion, i I think that thisese kind of houses are a good idea, but I am not sure Iif they have similar commodities as a regular homes.
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      투표하세요!
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