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- my dream
I am kazakh.
- And i am 16 years old.
- I always wanted go to the America.
I want to study there and want to improve my English.
Now i lives in Kazakhstan with my parents and my sisters.
- When I will 18,i'll go to the Vegas or New York,but of cource it's just child's dream))) But i think this my ''child's dream'' can executed, if I will continue study English and really want to go to the America and other cities there)

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- I am kazakh.
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- And i am 16 years old.
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- I always wanted go to the America.
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- I 've always wanted go to ~~the~~ America.
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- I want to study there and want to improve my English.
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- Now i lives in Kazakhstan with my parents and my sisters.
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- When I will 18,i'll go to the Vegas or New York,but of cource it's just child's dream))) But i think this my ''child's dream'' can executed, if I will continue study English and really want to go to the America and other cities there)
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- When I ~~will~~turn 18,i I'll go to ~~the~~Las Vegas or New York, but of courcse it's just a child's ¶dream.))) But iI think this my ''child's dream'' ~~can execut~~of mine can realized, if I ~~will~~ continue to study English and I really want to go to ~~the~~ America and other cities there.)
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