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- After I have bought a ticket for the 3:15 train, I set off home to pack my things up.
Купив билет на поезд в 3:15, я отправился домой упаковывать свои вещи.

nyuta38December 2015Voĉdoni nun!
- Raporti kiel spamo?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- After I have bought a ticket for the 3:15 train, I set off home to pack my things up.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- After I ~~have~~ bought a ticket for the 3:15 train, I set off home to pack my things up.
  Dianne__ Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- After I haved bought a ticket for the 3:15 train, I set off towards home to pack up my things up.
  Mithrawnurro Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- After I ~~have~~ bought a ticket for the 3:15 train, I ~~set off~~went home to pack my ~~things~~stuff up.
  Kon Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- Купив билет на поезд в 3:15, я отправился домой упаковывать свои вещи.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2