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Nice moments
- This thanksgiving I spend some wonderful time with my daughter, my husband and with family and friends.
- We had some get together ,where we ate really delicious food.My daughter help me clean up and redecorate the house before we had people over.Hope for another wonderful holiday soon.

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- This thanksgiving I spend some wonderful time with my daughter, my husband and with family and friends.
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- This thanksgiving I spendt some wonderful time with my daughter, my husband and with family and friends.
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- This tThanksgiving, I spendt some wonderful time with my daughter, my husband, and with family and friends.
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- We had some get together ,where we ate really delicious food.My daughter help me clean up and redecorate the house before we had people over.Hope for another wonderful holiday soon.
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- We had ~~some~~a get together , where we ate really delicious food. My daughter helped me clean up and redecorate the house before we had people over. Hope for another wonderful holiday soon.
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- We had ~~some~~a get -together ,where we ate some really delicious food. My daughter helped me clean up and redecorate the house before we had people over. (I/we/other pronoun) Hope for another wonderful holiday soon.
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