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    • Dear Madam, Miss W, I would like to apply for the position of Marketing Communication Driver, recently advertised on D career site.
  • After three years of experiences in international sales and marketing in the HVAC Industry, I am looking for new opportunities in the field of Digital Marketing and Communication.
  • As you can see from my enclosed C.V., I have occupied a position of international account manager for more than 3 years at M, gaining valuable experience in the HVAC industry.
    • My key mission was to develop and maintain the relations with several international clients (From 300.000 to 1.2 million Euros).
  • The achievements I am the most proud of is the development of our partnership with RB.
  • RB is the world leader in the distribution of electrical products and solutions for the industrial, residential and commercial market.
  • I was in charge of the coordination of Marketing and communication operations and that accompany the launching of C Brand in Belgium.
  • This includes mailing campaigns, organization of training and supervision of marketing operation realized by our clients.
  • This operations lead to an increase of the turnover of 70% on the area.
  • I was also in charge of the translation or the creations of marketing tools for our internationals clients.
  • Two projects that I have in mind are very important to me: the upgrading of packaging and the amelioration of the instructions of a product destined to the Balkan market in partnership with the technical department.
  • Those two projects were very interesting and helped us to really increase our sells in the area by adapting our products to the needs of the Balkans customers.
  • Thanks to my first work experience as a P.R. assistant at EParis, I have a very good knowledge of the Media in France (Press Online, offline and TV).
  • As our main clients were also coming for the energy area, I have learned a lot on the main energy issues, knowledge that are essential for a communication manager.
  • As well as those qualities, my studies at SP also developed my skills at writing reports, analyzing economics subjects and at making PPT presentation.
  • One of the main reasons for choosing Marketing and Communication area as a career is that for a long time, I have been interested on how a communication campaign can are important and can positively impact the sales of a company.
  • Especially in P.R. or with the new media.
  • The requirement of writing skills and creativity is also the reason why I want this position.
  • Indeed, after a few years in the sales, I would like to carry on my career in the industry and HVAC area but with day to day tasks that are more related to marketing and communications, subjects that I studied at SP for two years.
  • My reason for applying to D are as follows: First, I would like to carry on working in the industry because I am passionate by topics about Energy, energy efficiency, innovation and HVAC issues.
  • At Danfoss, I think I will be able to communicate on those topics and to learn from the best specialist on the subject.
  • Second, I would like to keep working in an international environment.
  • My experiences at the export department allowed me to work with clients from all around the world.
  • It was a great experience, very challenging and rewarding.
  • I seek to work in an international environment, which allows me to use the several languages I speak.
  • Think that, at D, I will be given the opportunities to work in an international team, and maybe, in a few year, to continue my career abroad.
  • Hard working, flexible, result oriented and fast learning person, I am thus deeply motivated to join D Team in Trevoux to maximize my skills and produce excellent Marketing and Communication results.
  • I am very excited about this opportunity and look forward to discuss my application with you in greater details.
  • Should you require any further information, please get in touch.
  • Yours sincerely,

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    • Dear Madam, Miss W, I would like to apply for the position of Marketing Communication Driver, recently advertised on D career site.
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    • Dear Madam, Miss W, ¶I would like to apply for the position of Marketing Communication Driver, recently advertised on D career site.
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    • After three years of experiences in international sales and marketing in the HVAC Industry, I am looking for new opportunities in the field of Digital Marketing and Communication.
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    • As you can see from my enclosed C.V., I have occupied a position of international account manager for more than 3 years at M, gaining valuable experience in the HVAC industry.
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    • My key mission was to develop and maintain the relations with several international clients (From 300.000 to 1.2 million Euros).
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    • My key mission was to develop and maintain the relations with several international clients (Fromworth 300.000 to 1.2 million Euros).
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    • RB is the world leader in the distribution of electrical products and solutions for the industrial, residential and commercial market.
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    • I was in charge of the coordination of Marketing and communication operations and that accompany the launching of C Brand in Belgium.
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    • This includes mailing campaigns, organization of training and supervision of marketing operation realized by our clients.
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    • Two projects that I have in mind are very important to me: the upgrading of packaging and the amelioration of the instructions of a product destined to the Balkan market in partnership with the technical department.
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    • Those two projects were very interesting and helped us to really increase our sells in the area by adapting our products to the needs of the Balkans customers.
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    • Thanks to my first work experience as a P.R. assistant at EParis, I have a very good knowledge of the Media in France (Press Online, offline and TV).
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    • As our main clients were also coming for the energy area, I have learned a lot on the main energy issues, knowledge that are essential for a communication manager.
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    • As well as those qualities, my studies at SP also developed my skills at writing reports, analyzing economics subjects and at making PPT presentation.
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    • One of the main reasons for choosing Marketing and Communication area as a career is that for a long time, I have been interested on how a communication campaign can are important and can positively impact the sales of a company.
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    • Indeed, after a few years in the sales, I would like to carry on my career in the industry and HVAC area but with day to day tasks that are more related to marketing and communications, subjects that I studied at SP for two years.
      Vote now!
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    • My reason for applying to D are as follows: First, I would like to carry on working in the industry because I am passionate by topics about Energy, energy efficiency, innovation and HVAC issues.
      Vote now!
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    • At Danfoss, I think I will be able to communicate on those topics and to learn from the best specialist on the subject.
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    • Think that, at D, I will be given the opportunities to work in an international team, and maybe, in a few year, to continue my career abroad.
      Vote now!
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    • Hard working, flexible, result oriented and fast learning person, I am thus deeply motivated to join D Team in Trevoux to maximize my skills and produce excellent Marketing and Communication results.
      Vote now!
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