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  • Patch Adams(second part)

    • Patch Adams is actives in more of sixty five states in the world.
    • His work born from his personal ache.
    • He knews so much the hospitals.He was hospitalized for many times in psychiatric hospitals.He attempted the suicide.For his experience , he saw that it is not enough a medicine for care a disease, but also the happiness through a smile.

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    • He knews so much the hospitals.He was hospitalized for many times in psychiatric hospitals.He attempted the suicide.For his experience , he saw that it is not enough a medicine for care a disease, but also the happiness through a smile.
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    • He knews so much the hospitals. He was hospitalized for many times in psychiatric hospitals. He attempted theo commit suicide.For With his experience , he saw that ithealing is not enough a medicine for care a diseasonly based on medicine, but also the happiness through a smile.
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