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Hello
Hello!!
My name is Jose Luis.
- I am learning english in english academy.
- My level is B1, but I want to imrpove my level.
- This is my first writting, and I hope that I can write more.

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- Hello!!
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- My name is Jose Luis.
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- I am learning english in english academy.
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- I am learning eEnglish in ~~english academy~~a language school.
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- My level is B1, but I want to imrpove my level.
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- My level is B1~~, but~~and I want to imrprove myin order to reach a higher level.
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- My level is B1, but I want to imrprove my English efficiency to reach a higher level.
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- This is my first writting, and I hope that I can write more.
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- This is my first writting, and I hope that I ~~can~~will write more.
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